For sentences I want said slowly, I begin them with ‘he said slowly, ‘ and then edit it out after. It tends to apply it to the next couple of sentences in the paragraph. Or I’ll just add in a ‘he said xxx,’ for whatever emotion I want the character to have to speed it up or have them whisper.
It's basic pine, with probably fake worm holes (there was a craze for both in the 1980s). 400 seems high, but if you like it, it is still better than anything from IKEA or Kmart.
For my most recent video (2001), the click through rate has jumped from 1.2% (based on 2k impressions) to about 7% (based on 1k impressions) since I changed the name. I think you were right. Thanks man.
Stories structured answered this on YouTube. Tyler durden was created by his own mind because he was unwilling to change. He was unwilling to suffer and deal with pain that would lead to growth, so his mind created an imaginary friend that would help him learn to face pain and the risks associated with change so he could live a better life. By shooting himself in the face, he proves he is willing to face the pain… and therefore Tyler no longer is needed by his mind. And so his mind lets Tyler go after he physically goes through the pain of the gunshot.
I would take the confessionals with a grain of salt. They are all filmed after all the events (in their street clothes) and I wouldn’t be surprised if the producers were telling them what to say if they were willing to create a side story to be the villian/hero. Which I think both would have been willing to create a false story for extra money.
What I find interesting is that we are up 30% and there are so few posts compared to last year when something like this happened. I think everyone is zen, and that contributes to it as we quietly hold. No one is getting all excited. And that’s good. Because we aren’t impressed. Not until it’s a phone number.
I couldn’t get past the first sentence. The commas and periods are not being used properly so it makes no sense. The first sentence should be broken up into three, and you have a giant quote (in quotations) and at the end say ‘he thought’. Usually quotes refer to someone speaking, so this just really threw me off. I was mildly interested in the idea, but the grammar needs work.
Just remember, the second act of the movie is about rejecting Tyler and how his extreme ideology leads to something bad as well. It's actually part of why I love the movie so much.
The YouTube channel Stories Structured has a great video on this exact point. It’s all about finding a balance in life. The physical gun isn’t what kills Tyler, it’s the fact that the narrator willingly faces the pain of being willing to change at the end… and so he no longer mentally needs Tyler to teach him that lesson. And so tyler disappears as he was only created because the narrator conjured him up because he couldn’t face change before.
For sentences I want said slowly, I begin them with ‘he said slowly, ‘ and then edit it out after. It tends to apply it to the next couple of sentences in the paragraph. Or I’ll just add in a ‘he said xxx,’ for whatever emotion I want the character to have to speed it up or have them whisper.
What’s the price?
We’re ok with the price. $400. Feel free to comment on that if you think I’m being ripped off.
It's basic pine, with probably fake worm holes (there was a craze for both in the 1980s). 400 seems high, but if you like it, it is still better than anything from IKEA or Kmart.
Very helpful. Thank you!
In terms of the script, I would make two changes:
Chiefs flag upside down
I thought it looked strange.
I'm honest, please don't take it badly! Your thumbnail skills are pretty good :)
For my most recent video (2001), the click through rate has jumped from 1.2% (based on 2k impressions) to about 7% (based on 1k impressions) since I changed the name. I think you were right. Thanks man.
The Fall of Man: A Novel
Was really excited by the concept but you lost me at "Nietzsche & Christianity".
I’d still recommend reading it. Neither are specifically mentioned, but pull themes from the two world views.
really good job, keep it up!
Thanks! Only my third video, but I’m enjoying putting them together. Thanks for watching.
Stories structured answered this on YouTube. Tyler durden was created by his own mind because he was unwilling to change. He was unwilling to suffer and deal with pain that would lead to growth, so his mind created an imaginary friend that would help him learn to face pain and the risks associated with change so he could live a better life. By shooting himself in the face, he proves he is willing to face the pain… and therefore Tyler no longer is needed by his mind. And so his mind lets Tyler go after he physically goes through the pain of the gunshot.
What about Ashely’s confessionals ?
I would take the confessionals with a grain of salt. They are all filmed after all the events (in their street clothes) and I wouldn’t be surprised if the producers were telling them what to say if they were willing to create a side story to be the villian/hero. Which I think both would have been willing to create a false story for extra money.
The fall of man by Mitchell White. It’s free on Amazon. Can’t go wrong with that.
Sci-Fi / Apocalypse Thriller - The Fall of Man
I’ll check it out. Thanks for the plot and thematic synopsis.
No problem. Hope you enjoy it.
What I find interesting is that we are up 30% and there are so few posts compared to last year when something like this happened. I think everyone is zen, and that contributes to it as we quietly hold. No one is getting all excited. And that’s good. Because we aren’t impressed. Not until it’s a phone number.
Here is the back of the book blurb:
Looks great! Thanks for sharing
You’re welcome. Thanks for checking it out.
Grabbed myself a copy.
Thanks so much! Means a lot to me. Hope you like it.
Looks interesting! I’ll check it out.
Thanks! Hope you enjoy.
I couldn’t get past the first sentence. The commas and periods are not being used properly so it makes no sense. The first sentence should be broken up into three, and you have a giant quote (in quotations) and at the end say ‘he thought’. Usually quotes refer to someone speaking, so this just really threw me off. I was mildly interested in the idea, but the grammar needs work.
Just remember, the second act of the movie is about rejecting Tyler and how his extreme ideology leads to something bad as well. It's actually part of why I love the movie so much.
The YouTube channel Stories Structured has a great video on this exact point. It’s all about finding a balance in life. The physical gun isn’t what kills Tyler, it’s the fact that the narrator willingly faces the pain of being willing to change at the end… and so he no longer mentally needs Tyler to teach him that lesson. And so tyler disappears as he was only created because the narrator conjured him up because he couldn’t face change before.